Rabu, 06 Januari 2016

First Draft


Name  : HENI OKTAVIANI
SRN   :1401120945
Final Project

DEFINITION PARAGRAPH ABOUT "MANDAU DANCE"



STEP 1: Do brainstorming using questioning, for example:
1. What is “  Mandau Dance “ Give examples. 
2. Write a definition in your own words for ‘Mandau Dance’’. (write a sentence using adjective clause) 
3. Why do you think ‘Mandau Dance’is so popular? 
4. what is the purpose of Mandau Dance?

STEP 2: Make an outline of your definition paragraph you are going to write.
Topic Sentence : One of popular custom in central kalimantan
Supporting Sentence : first   : what is Mandau  ?
Second :  what is Mandau Dance?
Third :  what is the purpose of Mandau Dance
Concluding Sentence :
STEP 3:  Write a first draft of the definition paragraph based on your outline. Do not forget to write strange words under the paragraph. (Upload your first draft on your own website).
Red: Topic Sentece
Black : Supporting Sentence
Blue: Concluding Sentece

                                                              



One of popular Dance in Central Kalimantan is Mandau dance. It very famous for Dayak traditional . Saber Dance is one of the traditional Dayak dance art, which features attractions that use the Mandau andthan Mandau dance name is taken from the property of the dance that is Mandau. Mandau is a traditional weapon Dayak shaped chopping knife / sword. Saber Dance aim to adorn the stage at the customs area, the welcoming ceremony, cultural festivals and other - other. And incredibly, this dance is also often displayed at the international cultural festival to represent the traditional ethnic culture in Indonesia. Mandau Dance performances accompanied by the strains of a melodious voice and stomping of Dayak traditional musical instruments namely gandang and Gerantung. Gerantug is a musical instrument made of metal, resembling the gamelan music of Java. according to folklore, music instrument Gerantung once scaled directly from heavenly as a means of communication to the ancestors. The strains of music accompaniment as one with the movement of the dancers in the show so it looks attractive and stunning. conclusion saber dance is a dance typical of Central Kalimantan were very popular from the beginning until now.
Dayak : Dayak is one of the tribles in central kalimantan

Mandau : . Mandau is a traditional weapon Dayak shaped chopping knife / sword.

2 komentar:

  1. heny don't forget use indeed in your paragraph

    BalasHapus
  2. heny in supporting details be better you use transition signal. example first, second etc

    BalasHapus