FINAL PRODUCT

  Final Product ( Revised Version)
NAME : HENI OKTAVIANI
  NIM     :    1401120945
 WRITING II ( Final Project )
                                                 

One of popular Dance in Central Kalimantan is Mandau dance. It very famous for Dayak traditional . Saber Dance is one of the traditional Dayak dance art, which features attractions that use the Mandau andthan Mandau dance name is taken from the property of the dance that is Mandau. Mandau is a traditional weapon Dayak shaped chopping knife / sword. Saber Dance aim to adorn the stage at the customs area, the welcoming ceremony, cultural festivals and other - other. And incredibly, this dance is also often displayed at the international cultural festival to represent the traditional ethnic culture in Indonesia. Mandau Dance performances accompanied by the strains of a melodious voice and stomping of Dayak traditional musical instruments namely gandang and Gerantung. Gerantug is a musical instrument made of metal, resembling the gamelan music of Java. according to folklore, music instrument Gerantung once scaled directly from heavenly as a means of communication to the ancestors. The strains of music accompaniment as one with the movement of the dancers in the show so it looks attractive and stunning. conclusion saber dance is a dance typical of Central Kalimantan were very popular from the beginning until now.  

Saber Dance often graced the stage in the customs area , the welcoming ceremony , cultural festivals and other - other . And incredibly , this dance is also often displayed at the international cultural festival to represent the traditional ethnic culture of Indonesia . Something very proud of course . In Central Kalimantan alone , this dance is still preserved and the many forms of dance studio to preserve it. That’s why Mandau dance is fomous in indonisia.

Mandau : . Mandau is a traditional weapon Dayak shaped chopping knife / sword.

SECOND DRAFT

Name  : HENI OKTAVIANI

SRN   : 1401120945

Red    : Topic sentence

Black : Supporting sentence

Blue   : Concluding Sentence

                                                          

 

Mandau Dance 

One of popular Dance in Central Kalimantan is Mandau dance. It very famous for Dayak traditional . Saber Dance is one of the traditional Dayak dance art, which features attractions that use the Mandau andthan Mandau dance name is taken from the property of the dance that is Mandau. Mandau is a traditional weapon Dayak shaped chopping knife / sword. Saber Dance aim to adorn the stage at the customs area, the welcoming ceremony, cultural festivals and other - other. And incredibly, this dance is also often displayed at the international cultural festival to represent the traditional ethnic culture in Indonesia. Mandau Dance performances accompanied by the strains of a melodious voice and stomping of Dayak traditional musical instruments namely gandang and Gerantung. Gerantug is a musical instrument made of metal, resembling the gamelan music of Java. according to folklore, music instrument Gerantung once scaled directly from heavenly as a means of communication to the ancestors. The strains of music accompaniment as one with the movement of the dancers in the show so it looks attractive and stunning. conclusion saber dance is a dance typical of Central Kalimantan were very popular from the beginning until now.

Dayak : Dayak is one of the tribles in central kalimantan

Mandau : . Mandau is a traditional weapon Dayak shaped chopping knife / sword.

First Draft

Name  : HENI OKTAVIANI

SRN   :1401120945

Final Project

DEFINITION PARAGRAPH ABOUT "MANDAU DANCE"

STEP 1: Do brainstorming using questioning, for example:
1. What is “  Mandau Dance “ Give examples. 

2. Write a definition in your own words for ‘Mandau Dance’’. (write a sentence using adjective clause) 

3. Why do you think ‘Mandau Dance’is so popular? 

4. what is the purpose of Mandau Dance?

STEP 2: Make an outline of your definition paragraph you are going to write.

Topic Sentence : One of popular custom in central kalimantan

Supporting Sentence : first   : what is Mandau  ?

Second :  what is Mandau Dance?

Third :  what is the purpose of Mandau Dance

Concluding Sentence :

STEP 3:  Write a first draft of the definition paragraph based on your outline. Do not forget to write strange words under the paragraph. (Upload your first draft on your own website).

Red: Topic Sentece
Black : Supporting Sentence
Blue: Concluding Sentece

                                                              

One of popular Dance in Central Kalimantan is Mandau dance. It very famous for Dayak traditional . Saber Dance is one of the traditional Dayak dance art, which features attractions that use the Mandau andthan Mandau dance name is taken from the property of the dance that is Mandau. Mandau is a traditional weapon Dayak shaped chopping knife / sword. Saber Dance aim to adorn the stage at the customs area, the welcoming ceremony, cultural festivals and other - other. And incredibly, this dance is also often displayed at the international cultural festival to represent the traditional ethnic culture in Indonesia. Mandau Dance performances accompanied by the strains of a melodious voice and stomping of Dayak traditional musical instruments namely gandang and Gerantung. Gerantug is a musical instrument made of metal, resembling the gamelan music of Java. according to folklore, music instrument Gerantung once scaled directly from heavenly as a means of communication to the ancestors. The strains of music accompaniment as one with the movement of the dancers in the show so it looks attractive and stunning. conclusion saber dance is a dance typical of Central Kalimantan were very popular from the beginning until now.

Dayak : Dayak is one of the tribles in central kalimantan

Mandau : . Mandau is a traditional weapon Dayak shaped chopping knife / sword.

REVISED VERSION

Writing II
Name   : HENI OKTAVIANI
SRN    : 1401120945         

                                                           What is Cencalok
                               

Cencalok. is one of a traditional foods of Central Kalimantan. Its name is a little weird if you are not used to. tempoyak is the same as the Malay cuisine is famous for its delicious taste. It is a kind of fermentation of small shrimp or prawn rebon

Making materials Cencalok

• Shrimp rebon. Delicate shrimp that are still wet.

How to make Cencalok

The first we clean rebon shrimp. Or the shrimp used to make paste and Mix coarse salt on shrimp. After that brooded.

3. After 3-4 days cencalok are ready to be consumed.

How to Cook Cencalok

 The first we look How can the on sauteed with onions and peppers or with mix juice sauce and then Or look at the  first cooked until done eaten with rice is still warm.

In conclusion Cencalok That was its way. to make it more palatable, cooked with a spicy taste. Will add appetite.
weird            :strange
fermentation : fermentasi
palataable     :delicious
delicate         :soft