CENCALOK
Cencalok. is one of a traditional foods in Central Kalimantan Tengah . His name is a little weird if you are not used to. tempoyak is the same as the Malay cuisine is famous for its delicious taste. It is a kind of fermentation of small shrimp or prawn rebon
Making
materials Cencalok
•
Shrimp rebon. Delicate shrimp that are still wet.
How
to make Cencalok
1.
Clean shrimp rebon. Or shrimp used to make paste.
2.
Mix coarse salt on shrimp. After that brooded.
3.
After 3-4 days cencalok are ready to be consumed.
How
to Cook Cencalok
1.
How can the on sauteed with onions and peppers or with menyampurkan juice
sauce.
2.
Or first cooked until done eaten with rice is still warm.
In conclusion
Cencalok That was it her way. to make it more palatable, cooked with a spicy
taste. Will add appetite
Heny, in your writing task about Cencalok. In the second sentence you use “Personal Pronoun (Kata ganti orang)” his. His is possessive adjective kata ganti kepemilikan for woman. You should change that with “it”. Thanks Heny. Good Luck.
BalasHapusIn the topic sentence you write "in central kalimantan tengah" is not good . you can change "in central kalimantaml". In you paragraph i get you use her and his don't use it you can change it be its
BalasHapusin your paragraph there is no time signal like first, second, than, now, next etc than you should used time signal order for example first how to make cencalok, second how to cook cencalok.
BalasHapusi think enogh, and i hope my coment is can make your writing to be better than before. :)