KUALA PEMBUANG CITY
One
of the place in central Kalimantan Tengah in KUALA PEMBUANG
I
live in Kuala Pembuang city, in there place a beautiful because there are many
cemara tree and many the beach and than i usually go to Bakau beach with my
friends.And than i usually go to mountain side. So many place in Kuala Pembuang
like as water fall, cemara tree’s, bakau beach, ujung pandaran beach, Hotel,bridge
Seruyan or bridge soekarno and another.
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BalasHapusOne of the places to visit in Central Kalimantan Tengah is Kuala Pembuang. It has many cemara trees. Kuala pembuang has some beaches, such as Bakau beach and Ujung Pandaran beach. Kuala Pembuang has many interesting places, such as Seruyan's bridge or Soekarno's bridge, mountain, etc. Sometimes, I go to there with my friends. In conclusion, Kuala Pembuang is interesting places to visit.
I think it would be better if you add some photos about attractions that are on there so when people see your blog they could see these places through photographs
BalasHapus